Chapter Book Q & A with Ariel Bernstein
When I was
approached to write a post for the Chapter Book Challenge, I wasn’t sure at
first what I should write about. So I asked writers in the KidLit411 Facebook
group what they would like to know about chapter books. Below are some of the questions
asked (a couple are condensed), and my answers.
How do you break into the market as
a writer?
To break
into the chapter book market, you mostly take the same route as breaking into
the picture book, middle grade, and young adult markets. You write the best
manuscript you can, query agents, and the agent will send the manuscript to
editors that accept chapter book submissions. Sometimes a writer will have a
previous relationship with an editor from other books, but that isn’t a
pre-requisite for an editor wanting a book. In fact, some editors only want to
work with writers in one category, such as only wanting to accept picture book
submissions from a writer.
Also,
sometimes a publisher will think of an idea for a chapter book series and
approach a writer (either directly or through their agent), to work on the
material. This is known as “work-for-hire.” Keep in mind that while this is
commonplace for the industry, there are still plenty of deals made for chapter
books where the story originates with the author.
Are most chapter books sold as
stand alone books or series?
Most
chapter books are sold in a multiple books deal, as the expectation (and hope!)
is that there will be many books in the series. My chapter book series, WARREN
& DRAGON, was originally sold in a 2-book deal. The offer for books 3 and 4
came later. Sometimes an editor and writer will have a finite number of books
in mind for a series, and something it will just depend on how well the series
does, and if the writer wants to continue with it. Keep in mind that you
usually don’t need to have written more than one book to submit a chapter book.
Sometimes an editor will want to know your ideas for future books, so it’s a
good idea to think of a few more storylines.
How to get your chapter book
manuscript submission ready?
Read a ton
of recently published chapter books to see what works in them, and then see if
the same elements are working in your own story. Also, it helps to find fellow
chapter book writers to trade critiques with. Most of the time you will have to
trust your instinct when your story seems ready for submission. Some writers
will find freelance editors and writers to give them feedback, and while this
can be helpful, it can also be costly and is not a necessity.
How do you decide if your book is a
chapter book or middle grade?
There are
specific things you can look for, such as the age of the main character(s). If
the main character is in grades kindergarten through 3rd, it is often a chapter
book. If the main character is in 4th grade through middle school,
they are often in a middle grade. Word count is a big tell as well. Chapter
books are usually anywhere from 2,000 to around 12,000 words, while middle
grade novels often start above 40,000 words. But the best way to tell if your
story should be a chapter book or a middle grade novel is the voice. To know
where the voice of your story belongs, you’d need to read published chapter
books and middle grades to see where it fits in.
Can you write a chapter book with
the main character as an animal?
Sure!
Editors are always looking for original concepts and characters in chapter
books, so having the main character be something they’ve never seen before is a
great way to get their attention. Just make sure that an animal main character
is still relatable to young chapter book readers. A chapter book reader would
likely understand the character of a cat who doesn’t want to go on their
family’s annual camping trip in order to watch the feline world series. But
they might not understand a book about a grandpa unicorn who knits horn caps
all day. If the right audience wants to read your book, it’ll work.
I hope the answers to these questions help all
chapter book writers! I’m looking forward to reading your stories!
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Ariel Bernstein has the voice of an owl, a monkey, and a boy with a dragon for a pet. In other words, she's a children's book author. Ariel's debut picture book, I Have a Balloon, illustrated by Scott Magoon, is a Fall 2017 Junior Library Guild Selection. Her debut chapter book series, Warren & Dragon, illustrated by Mike Malbrough, is called "adorable fun for chapter book newbies" by Kirkus Reviews. You can find Ariel online at https://www.arielbernsteinbooks.com, and on Twitter and Instagram at @ArielBBooks.
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Hi, Ariel! If anyone can pull off writing "about a grandpa unicorn who knits horn caps," it's you. I've found that selling a CB series is more difficult because each pub house has their own guidelines and they lean toward the "work for hire" approach. So, it's really important that we study guidelines and mentor texts before submitting. Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteI’m working on my historical fiction chapter book series so this right up my alley...
ReplyDeleteGreat post!
Thank you for the information on chapter books. My picture books tend to run long (1,000 to 1,500 words) and I have turned 3 of them into chapter books and am working on two more.
ReplyDeleteI saw your post last week, asking for questions about chap books, and yiuvyo done a great job answering so many of them! Thx for the tips,Ariel😊
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your tips. They are very helpful.
ReplyDeleteAs I begin my second MG project, I am reminded in your post about paying attention to voice and making sure it fits that age range. Thanks for sharing your tips!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Ariel, for sharing your insight and knowledge.
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your experience
ReplyDeleteGreat post! Thank you for sharing! This Info is always helpful! Love your sense of humor!
ReplyDeleteGreat tips, Ariel! Thank you for sharing your expertise!
ReplyDeleteAriel this is a great post! I liked the question/answer format and the information is just what I needed. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteI love I Have a Balloon! I use this in my classroom to teach the difference between plot and theme. My third graders love it too.
ReplyDeleteGreat information...thank you!
ReplyDeleteSo inspiring to hear these answers! Thank-you for gathering the questions and answering them for us!
ReplyDeleteThanks Ariel, lots to think about.
ReplyDeleteThank you for a very helpful post! Ha -- when I asked my editor if she thought I could try my hand at early chapter books she sent me . . . Warren and Dragon 100 Friends as an example of excellence that I should aspire to :)
ReplyDeleteHi Ariel - thanks for a great post! You know I love WARREN AND DRAGON! Looking forward to more!
ReplyDeleteThank you for answering these helpful questions (or helpfully answering these questions or possibly your helpful answers to these thoughtful questions)...
ReplyDeleteThanks for your post! I have WARREN AND DRAGON on my to-read pile by my bed. =)
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