What
to Do When You Hate What You’ve Written
Writing is awesome. It is so much fun to
sit and write or type something out, read it over, and be rapt in what you’ve
written. It might make you laugh or make you cry. It might make you feel
scared. It might make you feel like you can make it in this caper.
Except sometimes it doesn’t.
Sometimes you read a piece of your work and
you hate it. Like, seriously hate it. It doesn’t have the feel you were after.
It’s dull and drab and goes nowhere. It was a brilliant idea that doesn’t come
across at all!
Think this just happens to you? Think
again.
IT HAPPENS TO EVERYONE!!!
Sure, it happens more to some people than
others, but it happens to everyone.
So what do you do when you’ve written
something that you hate? To me, there are a few options.
1. Put it aside for a period of time. Especially if it is an idea or
theme that you are really keen to explore, put it aside. Leave it. Move on to
something else. Stick it in a drawer and do not think of it again.
Except you will.
You will think about it.
Suddenly, and it may be weeks or months
down the track, something will pop into your head. An idea. A thought on how
you can fix it, make it better.
That’s when you take it out of the drawer
and get back to work.
(P.S. If that doesn’t happen, if you don’t
get a burst of inspiration, you can still get back to work on it. Or not. You
can also just leave it there for some more time.)
2. Work through it. Some people actually enjoy working through that
phase of hating a piece of work, digging deep into it and really finding out
why it isn’t working, doing the hard yards to come up with a piece of work that
they’re happy with. To them, the final piece can feel more rewarding, and they
can love it even more because they
hated it at one point.
This isn’t me …
3. Show it to people you trust will be honest with you. Yes men are not
your friend when you’re a writer. Not if you want to improve, at least.
Let these other people read it. If you tell
them that you’re not happy with it, don’t say why. Don’t lead their comments in
a certain direction. Just let them read it and tell you what they think. Two
things might happen here. One is that they may actually like it. Just because
you hate it doesn’t mean everyone else will. Then you have a decision to make,
because is there a point to producing a piece of work if you hate it? Even if
others like it? That’s up to you.
The second thing that might happen is that
they, with a fresh set of eyes, may be able to give you ideas that can turn the
piece around. If those ideas click with you, well, that’s when it’s time to get
back to work.
4. The last and final thing I think you can do when you hate what
you’ve written, and sometimes this can happen before or after you steps 1, 2 or
3, is to chuck it out. Just chuck it. You don’t have to love and keep every
single thing you write. If you do, if you cling to thinking every piece has to
be brilliant, and that you and everyone else in the world has to love every
word you ever produce, you will never move forward.
You will never become a great writer.
You have to be prepared to just let some
things go and move on.
Some pieces are steps along your journey,
and that’s it. You need to get them out of your system to free yourself up for
what you really want to write, even if you don’t know it at the time.
And even if you chuck a piece, there may still
be snippets of dialogue or description that you may keep in a notebook, or
there may be a theme that you may still like to try and write something around
later, but you don’t have to keep the entire piece.
There’s no rule.
Not everything you write has to be a
masterpiece, but it is all part of becoming a better writer. And sometimes,
throwing something out and letting it go will free you up to write something
brilliant.
Good luck, and happy writing!
A qualified Engineer and Primary School Teacher, Adam Wallace settled on writing books for children as his career of choice. With more than 20 published, including Better Out Than In and the How to Draw series, Adam is fast becoming a well-known name in the world of children’s books. You can find Adam's books at Adam Wallace Books and his Facebook author page here.
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About the Author
A qualified Engineer and Primary School Teacher, Adam Wallace settled on writing books for children as his career of choice. With more than 20 published, including Better Out Than In and the How to Draw series, Adam is fast becoming a well-known name in the world of children’s books. You can find Adam's books at Adam Wallace Books and his Facebook author page here.
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This is all very good advice.
ReplyDeletePutting a story aside usually helps me. Fresh eyes see more possibilities.
ReplyDeleteI already have Mary's book so you don't need to add me in to the drawing but I had to comment on this sage post by Adam--excellent points, all! I write bad stuff every day--and I follow pretty much all these steps, depending on the level of bad writing. :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you! Great tips. I always write crap the first time around. It is part of the process a book goes through. I have Writing Irresistible Kidlit so don't enter me.
ReplyDeleteI agree ~ sometimes things just do not flow or they don't sound as great when you go back to them as they felt when you first wrote them (and vice versa). I will put it aside for a while so I'm not trying to fix it out of emotion (which tends to make more of a mess) and/or will show it to someone for feedback so that my bias is out of the way ~ the added bonus (I've found) is that their comments will often trigger just what I need in an unexpected way.
ReplyDeleteGreat advice. (Although I did a major chucking of a whole bunch of manuscripts once and ended up regretting it!)
ReplyDeleteExcellent advice, it is always much better to have words down than nothing, but you do need to take a break too!
ReplyDeletesometimes, even the bad stuff is... BETTER OUT THAN IN! good advice Mr Wallace!
ReplyDeleteVery interesting thank you.
ReplyDeleteSuch great advice. I've been stuck for a while on a book. Will definitely use your ideas!
ReplyDeleteGreat advice here! I am that person who loves to take something I'm not happy with and make it a challenge to make it better! Like you said, sometimes it's just bits and pieces of a manuscript that are salvageable!! Thank you for sharing your time with us!
ReplyDeleteGreat article! I've got one manuscript that I love.. the characters, the voice etc but it sits there thumbing its nose at me and giving me raspberries. It's been on the back burner for months and whenever I go back to it … more raspberries!!! I wonder if I can include the raspberries into the book, LOL
ReplyDeleteGreat article, I have written a few I didn't like, we learn from this.
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad I'm not the only one this happens to :) The first week of the challenge was like this for me - it's sitting in a drawer and I'm working on something else :)
ReplyDeleteThank you for the post, great info!
ReplyDeleteNice to know that this is a normal phenomenon. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteGreat advice. Sometimes, especially new writers need to know it is okay to throw things out.
ReplyDeleteThank you.