WRITING A CHAPTER BOOK IS LIKE WRITING A PICTURE BOOK - sort of
Becky initially asked me to write a post about “How I got my chapter book contract.” Her request came around the same time that I published a similar story on my blog. You can read that post here. Instead of repeating myself, I’ve decided to share some chapter book knowledge that I picked up in the process of turning my picture book into a chapter book.
A small survey in the Chapter BookChallenge Facebook group proved to me that many members write both picture books and chapter books. This post will focus on the question, how is writing a chapter book a little like writing a picture book? It may not be helpful to those who have been writing chapter books for a long time, but it should be helpful to those who are just getting into chapter book writing.
As with picture books, there is no perfect formula for writing chapter books. However, there are great guidelines. So, what I offer is meant to give you a sense of direction and order when writing. It is not intended to say this is the ONLY way to go. This post only touches on some basic elements of chapter book writing.
DESCRIPTION, ACTION, AND SHOW DON’T TELL
In chapter books (and usually in picture books) action is important for keeping the young reader engaged. Like picture books, chapter books don’t have a lot of description. Unlike picture books, illustrations do not help tell part of the story. So, it is important to show and not tell. Show your characters in action. Show your characters reacting to their situation. And of course show their environment. But don’t get carried away with long descriptive passages. If you do, your young reader will lose interest.
Just to be clear. . . .
There are some illustrations (usually line art) in chapter books, which help the young reader to visualize better. There are a variety of chapter books for beginning chapter book readers that have many illustrations – often colored. Some examples are Marcie Colleen’s Super Happy Party Bears series, Kate DiCamillo’s Bink and Gollie, and Mercy Watson also by Kate DiCamillo. This post focuses on longer chapter books for younger readers. Also, I want to be clear that middle grade books have more description than chapter books.
I see writing chapter books as being similar to writing a number of individual picture books related to one big story goal.
So, each chapter has its own beginning, middle, and end that are all centered around that specific chapter’s goal. However, the chapter goal needs to relate to the big goal in some way. Everything that happens in the story should have a strong thread running between the problem or goal established in the beginning and the resolution presented in the end.
Like picture book beginnings, the individual chapter beginning usually establishes the problem or goal for that chapter. It might establish the setting, if it has changed from the last chapter. It most likely establishes the obstacle to achieving the chapter goal. The beginning of a chapter will sometimes subtly reconnect the reader to what happened in the previous chapter.
Just like the middle of a picture book, the middle of the individual chapter shows the protagonist’s attempts to overcome his obstacles. And as with a picture book plot, the chapter story tension escalates and sometimes falls. It may or may not fall, depending on where the author has chosen to leave the reader hanging.
Unlike picture book endings, individual chapter endings are not usually satisfying endings because you want to entice your reader to look forward to the next chapter. However, you do want to give your reader a sense of satisfaction with each chapter while still keeping her in suspense. The ending of the chapter often comes in the middle of a scene. Doing this creates questions in the reader’s mind that she will want to see answered. Just as picture books often end with a twist, individual chapters might end with a twist. This engages the reader further.
PUTTING THE CHAPTERS TOGETHER
The combined chapters work to form the story or character arc related to the big story problem or goal.
Like the first page(s) in a picture book, the first chapter hooks the reader by presenting the inciting incident. This is the event that pushes your protagonist out of his ordinary world into the challenging world that the story builds. It also provides the setting, time period, and the voice and tone of the story. Naturally, it introduces the protagonist and maybe some other characters. Backstory is avoided or limited in chapter books for young readers.
SETTING THE HOOK
The next chapters set the hook by deepening the reader’s understanding of the character’s situation. They also introduce more characters.
CLIMBING THE ARC MOUNTAIN
Like the middle scenes of a picture book, the middle chapters show the protagonist’s attempts to solve his problem or achieve his goal. They offer unexpected turns, surprise setbacks, and changes that often require the protagonist to make a decision or choice. With each challenge and decision, the reader becomes more emotionally connected to the protagonist and the story and therefore become more hooked.
With each new chapter the tension rises and the stakes get higher until the protagonist reaches his DARKEST MOMENT. This is where he and the reader experience a period of defeat. This makes the reader want to keep reading while hoping for the best.
The darkest moment is followed by the INNER CLIMAX. The protagonist has some sort of lightbulb moment that causes him to think outside the box. There is usually a perceived or real risk in making the choice that raises the tension. This new thinking, or choice, or decision moves the story forward to the outer climax where the protagonist takes action on his new way of thinking. All the while, the reader is taking this emotional rollercoaster ride with the protagonist.
The OUTER CLIMAX follows the inner climax. This is where the protagonist takes action based on the inner climax decision or choice. Sometimes the inner climax is not apparent or nearly undetectable. But there is always a climax. This is the turning point that leads the protagonist to the resolution of the story.
The RESOLUTION/CONCLUSION of the story presents a new perspective for the protagonist. The reader becomes aware of some sort of change or personal growth in the protagonist. All loose ends are tied up here. The reader should be left thinking about the story and maybe about how he relates, but he should not be wondering about missing elements that should have been resolved in the end. Often there is a surprise twist. Sometimes, the protagonist does not get what he set out to get, but he still learns and grows in some way.
SCENE AND CHAPTER COHESIVENESS
A while back, I wrote a blog post on episodic stories. You can read it here. I wrote it for picture books, but it applies to chapter books as well. When you read the word “scene” in the post, think in terms of scenes within each chapter, but also consider each chapter as a scene. What I want you to see is that all scenes and all chapters need to be connected. I can’t really get into cause and effect in this post, but if you aren’t clear regarding what that is, do some searches and read up on it.
Before I teach an entire course on chapter book writing, I will end this . . . well, sort of. I want to offer a PDF with a basic analysis that I did on THE TALENTED CLEMENTINE by Sara Pennypacker. It breaks the story down as related to the tips I’ve shared in this post. I think it gives a very clear idea of how each chapter tells a story of its own, which is why I see them as being similar to picture books. It also gives a clear picture of how everything that happens in the story is connected to the problem established in the beginning and the resolution presented in the end.
Happy chapter book writing!
Alayne Kay Christian is an award-winning children’s book author and a certified life coach. Her picture book Butterfly Kisses for Grandma and Grandpa (Blue Whale Press, LLC) received the Mom’s Choice Awards gold medal and an IPPY Awards silver medal. Alayne’s Sienna, the Cowgirl Fairy chapter book series launches in April 2017 with the first book, Sienna, the Cowgirl Fairy: Trying to Make it Rain (Clear Fork Publishing). Her picture book Mischievous Maverick is scheduled to be released by Clear Fork Publishing in early 2018. Alayne is the creator and teacher of a picture book writing course, Art of Arc: How to Writeand Analyze Picture Book Manuscripts. In 2016, Alayne and her husband sold their home in the Dallas, Texas area and became nomads as full-time RVers and part-time sailors.
Alayne has generously offered the prize for today's give-away. She is offering one person a critique on the first five chapters of their chapter book. Only signed-up members of the challenge qualify for the drawing. In order to be entered into the drawing, leave a comment on this post. A winner will be drawn by a random number generator on March 31st.
Thank you, Becky for inviting me to be a guest on our blog and for the fantastic Chapter Book Challenge. Thank you for inspiring writers, including me, to keep after those chapter book manuscripts.ReplyDelete
I really enjoyed seeing how you compared writing chapter books to picture books. It made me think of my own chapter books and I found myself stopping after each example and thinking, "did I do this like Alayne says I should?" ;~)
Wow! Donna, thank you for letting me know it got you thinking. I know you have a lot of experience under your belt, so I am thrilled to know it might help even experienced writers. I appreciate you sharing this with me. Hugs.ReplyDelete
Thank you Alayne for this informative post! I found I can apply this technique to a certain character driven/chapter book I am working on so it got my heart racing!! I wasn't quite sure wether I wanted it to be a PB or chapter book so now I will try it this way and see if it works! Wow! Thanks again for the inspiration!!ReplyDelete
So glad you found the post helpful, Kelly! And to get our heart racing - I know you found some promise in the idea of seeing if your PB might make a good CB.Delete
Great post, Alayne! I love jumping around from PB to CB to MG to YA, and thinking about the differences that make each unique. There are common threads, which you've highlighted, and those special differences, not just length.ReplyDelete
Thanks for taking time to read and comment, Sherry. It looks like you have the joy of writing all levels of children's books. Happy writing!Delete
I love your post, Alayne! Thanks for your generous tips and advice on writing Chapter Books.ReplyDelete
So glad you like the post, Sue. Thanks for taking the time to let me know!Delete
Thank you so much for this, Alayne. When I start revising, I'll really look at each chapter as its own mini story.ReplyDelete
I'm so glad the post gave you some food for thought. Happy revising!Delete
Thank-you Alayne - this post provides a great map to writing chapters and a chapter book. Lots to think about as we continue down our drafting path!ReplyDelete
Glad you like the "map", Liz ;-) Happy drafting!Delete
This is great, Alayne! Thanks so much for sharing. I am bookmarking it to come back to again and again!ReplyDelete
So glad you might find the info useful, Ellen. Thanks for letting me know.Delete
This is fantastic "how to" information for CB plotting and writing. Thanks so much for sharing these insights! I also appreciate the link to the PDF file, which is also helpful reference.ReplyDelete
Meli, I'm happy to know that you like the post and PDF. Thank you!Delete
This is a great intro to those of us who know the PB format and want to stretch out to writing the CB. TY, Alayne!ReplyDelete
Kathy, Sorry about the delay in commenting. Blogspot wasn't accepting my comments for a while. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment!Delete
This is great! I am learning so much, thank you! :)ReplyDelete
Jerra, Yay! Thrilled you are learning. Thank you for letting me know.Delete
This is great! I am learning so much, thank you! :)ReplyDelete
Alayne, what a great post, and wonderful prize! You've given me a lot to look at and consider while I work on my chapter books. Thank you!ReplyDelete
Rebecca, I'm glad the post got you thinking. I hope it helps as you move forward.Delete
Wow, thanks so much Alayne. This is a very helpful post!ReplyDelete
I'm glad you found the post helpful, Emily. I appreciate you letting me know.Delete
Wonderful post, so much information to think about!ReplyDelete
Ashley, I hope the thinking helps you in the future. Thanks for commenting.Delete
Info packed post, thank you! And, congrats on the RV life, we are looking forward to that as well.ReplyDelete
The post is my pleasure, Anita. How exciting that you will one day be an RVer. It's one of the best things we've ever done.Delete
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reading this has been a light bulb moment for me, thank you!ReplyDelete
I love that the post gave you a light bulb moment, Shanah! Thank you so much for letting me know!Delete
Thank you, Alayne! I am printing this to keep for future reference. I particularly loved the section about climbing the arc mountain...so important to keep track of! Looking forward to reading your SIENA THE COWGIRL FAIRY chapter book series!ReplyDelete
Thank you, Melissa! I'm honored to learn you have printed the post to use for future reference.Delete
Thanks, Alayne! I'm so glad this post popped up today because it was just what I needed.ReplyDelete
Yahoo. I'm happy that the post came at just the right time for you, Heather. Thanks for letting me know.Delete
Great post, Alayne! This post couldn’t have come at a better time for me as I am expanding a couple of my picture books into chapter books and have expanded one of my chapter books into a middle grade.ReplyDelete
It makes my day to learn that the post came at the perfect time for you. Best of luck with your chapter books and MG.Delete
Great tips Alayne :) Thank you for sharing themReplyDelete
It is my pleasure, Melissa. Thank you for taking time to read and comment.Delete
Excellent tips! Thank youReplyDelete
I'm so glad you like the tips, Sylvia. Thank you for letting me know.Delete
Appreciative for such brilliant blog yours...!ReplyDelete
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I especially appreciate this because that is exactly where I am right now, that is beginning the process of moving from picture to chapter books. So this is timely. I can see that the thought put into keeping a picture book reader satisfied with each page but wanting to turn to the next page is now done with chapters instead of the pages.
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